Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Tuesday, August 3, 2010

free swimming medusa

5-7-5-7-7


Usually, each line consists of one image or idea; unlike English poetry, one does not seek to "wrap" lines in tanka, though in the best tanka the five lines often flow seamlessly into one thought.

5-7-5-7-7

California fog
Wrapped in an endless color
(I am here with you)
Like a late green daydream draws
Effortlessly toward evening

vacation

...and then all of a sudden you reappear.